SPLOSH SPLOSH SPLOSH! was all I could hear walking down the path. Goosebumps appeared on my arms and I felt drenched. Droplets were dripping on my head and sprinkles of spray were blowing in my face.
Great writing. I really enjoyed reading your show not tell. I loved the part where you said 'Droplets were dripping on my head and sprinkles of spray were blowing on my face'. It was very entertaining. Anyways, keep up the good work.
Hi Sylvia,
ReplyDeleteGreat writing. I really enjoyed reading your show not tell. I loved the part where you said 'Droplets were dripping on my head and sprinkles of spray were blowing on my face'. It was very entertaining. Anyways, keep up the good work.
-Mubba