Tuesday, February 10, 2009

Rainbows End

On Friday in the holidays I went to Rainbows End. I went with my twin cousins Dawn and Dawn. I went on the Fearfall and I felt like I was going to puke. Despite that it was so much fun that I went on it two times.
After that I went on the dogems. I crashed into this girl driving so I said, ''Sorry.'' Then she said 'It's fine''.
When It was finished I got out and ran to my mum and we went on the roller coaster. The roller coaster was so cool and fun that I went on it three times. The roller coaster was like I was going to fall upside down.
Next my mum said, ''Do you want to go on the pirate ship?" I said, ''Okay''. It was so cool it felt like I was going to fall down the boat when it went to the bottom. My cousin was going to puke on the pirate ship and I thought it was going to break because there were lots of people on it. After that we all went home and on the way there we got ice cream. We went to the beach to eat our ice creams. When we finished we had are little swim.


  1. Hi via its your brother sione it was a cool as story i wanted to go now o well i better go now from sione

  2. Hi Via,
    Great story!I feel like goig to Rainbows End now.But not puking though!You also made me feel like ice cream!I'm looking forward to your next cool story!


  3. Hey Sylvia

    What a great story.
    I really liked it.
    I wish I went to Rainbow Ends in the holiday.
    Talk to you later.

    Your Sincerely Mubasshira

  4. Hi Sylvia,

    I've jut finished reading all your stories and am really proud of you, i really enjoyed your story about Rainbows End, it was a fun day.

    I am in your ict room now with all the other parent reading all their childrens room

    Well done and keep up the great work!


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